Posted by: worddreams | November 18, 2009

How Do You Use Twitter

The most common reason for NOT using Twitter–among those who don’t–is: Why tell everyone when I walk into my backyard?

Twitter is so much more than mundane details, as proven by its popularity. Here are some reasons I and my colleagues use Twitter:

  • stay in touch with friends
  • network
  • proselytize
  • distill my thoughts to sound bites of 140 characters
  • a quick update on celebrities/shows
  • promote my business
  • research
  • as the 21st century water cooler

Tell me why you use Twitter. If it’s not listed on the poll (like education–any use it in their classes?), add a comment at the bottom.

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Posted by: worddreams | November 17, 2009

7 Books to Understand Your Character’s Psychology

Characters have to be believable. If not, readers put your book down. If your character is a mathematician, he has

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The Man Who Thought His Wife Was a Hat

to think like one, act like one, dress like one. It’s not enough to tell us he works for the NSA analyzing numbers. You have to give him all the quirks that make us believe this guy could save the world with his cerebellum.

If you’re not that guy, how do you convince readers he’s real? Traditional wisdom says two things:

  • interview people
  • watch people

Those are good–especially for your main characters. In fact, you probably can’t create a protagonist and antagonist without interviewing those who have walked in their footsteps.

But what about the dozens of other characters who wander through a scene, playing bit but important parts in your plot? Here are some great books that will allow you to color them with a consistent brush:

  • The Man Who Thought His Wife Was a Hat by Oliver Sachs. Any of his books will give you insight into creative, fascinating psychoses that people live with. Can you imagine looking at a scene and not being able to put it together as a cohesive picture? All you see are bits of red and pieces of animals? A character in the early stages of that psychoses might be a fascinating addition to your story
  • How Mathematicians Think, by William Byers. they don’t think like us. I have a brilliant friend who–I kid you not–hates graphs because they distill the information for him. He’d prefer the raw data so he can see the connections. If you’re including someone like that in your plot, this book will make sure you include ambiguity, paradox and their other brilliance in your character’s thoughts and actions.
  • Anatomy of Motive, by John Douglas. If you write mysteries, this book will help you explore what makes criminals who they are.
  • Creating Character Emotions by Ann Hood. She explains how to write compelling fresh emotions for your characters. Much of this lies in the showing-not-telling truism; she explains how to show hostility, hate, etc., rather than saying the words.
  • Please Understand Me I and II by David Keirsey. This is a personality style determinant. Very detailed, but highly relevant for analyzing your main characters’ temperament, character and intelligence.
  • Writers Guide to Character Traits by Linda Edelstein. This includes profiles of human behaviors and personality types. That way, you can keep your character within the required parameters.
  • Body language. There are so many great books and websites on this. I have many posts on descriptors and character traits that will get you started (see the right side of this blog). Don’t miss this detail. If your character doesn’t show those tells that every human on the planet does, s/he won’t be believable. No one speaks only with their mouth.

If you have favorite books on this subject, share with us. I’d love to hear about them!

 

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Posted by: worddreams | November 12, 2009

Great Writing Has No Formula

Great post from the Wall Street Journal on how great writers write:

How to Write a Great Novel

From writing in the bathroom (Junot Díaz) to dressing in character (Nicholson Baker), 11 top authors share their methods for getting the story on the page

By ALEXANDRA ALTER

Richard Powers lounges in bed all day and speaks his novels aloud to a laptop computer with voice-recognition software. Junot Diaz, author of the Pulitzer-prize winning novel “The Brief and Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao,” shuts himself in the bathroom and perches on the edge of the tub with his notebook when he’s tackling a knotty passage. Hilary Mantel, whose Tudor drama “Wolf Hall” claimed this year’s Man Booker Prize, jumps in the shower when she gets stuck. “The number of pages I’ve got that are water marked, I can’t tell you,” Ms. Mantel said.

An unusually robust crop of books from some of the biggest names in literature has landed this fall. Kazuo Ishiguro, Orhan Pamuk, Mr. Powers and Nicholson Baker have new books out this fall, along with a host of other prominent authors.

Behind the scenes, many of these writers say they struggle with the daily work of writing, clocking thousands of solitary hours staring at blank pages and computer screens. Most agree on common hurdles: procrastination, writer’s block, the terror of failure that looms over a new project and the attention-sucking power of the Internet.

A few authors bristle when asked the inevitable question about how they write. Richard Ford declined to reveal his habits, explaining in an email that “those are the kind of questions I hope no one asks me after readings and lectures.” Others revel in spilling minute details, down to their preferred brand of pen (Amitav Ghosh swears by black ink Pelikan pens) or font size (Anne Rice uses 14-point Courier; National Book Award nominee Colum McCann sometimes uses eight-point Times New Roman, forcing himself to squint at the tiny type). Some now offer fans a window into the process, reporting on their progress on blogs and Twitter feeds. On his author Web site, John Irving describes how he begins his novels by writing the last sentence first.

Here is how a range of leading authors describe their approach to writing—a process that can be lonely, tedious, frustrating and exhilarating.

NICHOLSON BAKER

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Most days, Nicholson Baker rises at 4 a.m. to write at his home in South Berwick, Maine. Leaving the lights off, he sets his laptop screen to black and the text to gray, so that the darkness is uninterrupted. After a couple of hours of writing in what he calls a dreamlike state, he goes back to bed, then rises at 8:30 to edit his work.

He wrote his first novel, “The Mezzanine,” by dictating to a voice recorder during his commute to work. For his recent novel “The Anthologist,” a first-person narrative by a frustrated poet who’s struggling to write the introduction to a new anthology, he grew out a beard to resemble his character, put on a floppy brown hat, set up a video camera on a tripod and videotaped himself giving poetry lectures. He transcribed about 40 hours worth of tape, and ended up with some 1,000 pages of notes and transcription. Creating the voice of a rambling professor “was something I had to work on a lot in order to get the feeling of being sloppy,” said Mr. Baker.

Even then, Mr. Baker decided the first draft was too orderly. So he divided the novel into numbered sections, then went to a random-number generating Web site and arranged the chunks according to the random order it gave him. It was a total mess. He had to return to the original order, although a few random bits worked. “I had to claw myself back to the old way,” he said.

ORHAN PAMUK

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Turkish novelist and Nobel laureate Orhan Pamuk often rewrites the first line of his novels 50 or 100 times. “The hardest thing is always the first sentence—that is painful,” says Mr. Pamuk, whose book, “The Museum of Innocence,” a love story set in 1970s Istanbul, came out last month.

Mr. Pamuk writes by hand, in graph-paper notebooks, filling a page with prose and leaving the adjacent page blank for revisions, which he inserts with dialogue-like balloons. He sends his notebooks to a speed typist who returns them as typed manuscripts; then he marks the pages up and sends them back to be retyped. The cycle continues three or four times.

Mr. Pamuk says he writes anywhere inspiration strikes—on airplanes, in hotel rooms, on a park bench. He’s not given to bursts of spontaneity, though, when it comes to plot and story structure. “I plan everything,” Mr. Pamuk says.

HILARY MANTEL

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British novelist Hilary Mantel likes to write first thing in the morning, before she has uttered a word or had a sip of coffee. She usually jots down ideas and notes about her dreams. “I get very jangled if I can’t do it,” she says.

She’s an obsessive note taker and always carries a notebook. Odd phrases, bits of dialogue and descriptions that come to her get tacked to a 7-foot-tall bulletin board in her kitchen; they remain there until Ms. Mantel finds a place for them in her narrative.

Ms. Mantel spent five years researching and writing the book, “Wolf Hall,” her Booker Prize-winning Tudor drama set in the court of Henry VIII, out in the U.S. this month. The trickiest part was trying to match her version to the historical record. To avoid contradicting history, she created a card catalogue, organized alphabetically by character. Each card contained notes showing where a particular historical figure—such as protagonist Thomas Cromwell, Henry’s adviser—was on relevant dates.

“You really need to know, where is the Duke of Suffolk at the moment? You can’t have him in London if he’s supposed to be somewhere else,” she says.

One day, she was in a panic over how she would fit everything she needed to into the novel. She took a shower—her usual head-clearing ritual. “I burst out of the shower crying ‘It’s two books!’” says Ms. Mantel, who is writing a sequel that will end with Cromwell’s beheading in 1540.

KAZUO ISHIGURO

From the time he was a teenager until his mid-20s, novelist Kazuo Ishiguro tried, unsuccessfully, to make it as a songwriter. His early career helped him to develop his style of spare, first-person narration where the narrator seems to know more than he or she lets on at first.

Mr. Ishiguro, author of six novels, including the Booker-prize winning “Remains of the Day,”typically spends two years researching a novel and a year writing it. Since his novels are written in the first person, the voice is crucial, so he “auditions” narrators by writing a few chapters from different characters’ points of view. Before he begins a draft, he compiles folders of notes and flow charts that lay out not just the plot but also more subtle aspects of the narrative, such as a character’s emotions or memories.

Obsessive preparation “gives me the opportunity to have my narrators suppress meaning and evade meaning when they say one thing and mean something else,” says Mr. Ishiguro.

He collects his notes in binders and writes a first draft by hand. He edits with a pencil, then types the revised version into a computer, where he further refines it, sometimes deleting chunks as large as 100 pages.

In spite of all the groundwork, some novels fail to come together, including one that took place in medieval Britain. “I showed my wife a segment that I had honed down and she said, “This is awful. You have to figure out how they speak to each other. They’re speaking in a moron language,” he says.

MICHAEL ONDAATJE

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Booker-prize winner Michael Ondaatje’s preferred medium is 8½-by-11-inch Muji brand lined notebooks. He completes the first three or four drafts by hand, sometimes literally cutting and pasting passages and whole chapters with scissors and tape. Some of his notebooks have pages with four layers underneath.

Words come easily for the author—the bulk of the work is arranging and rewriting sentences. “I don’t understand this whole concept of writer’s block,” says Mr. Ondaatje, who says he is working on a novel at the moment but declines to elaborate. “If I get stuck, I work on another scene.”

Mr. Ondaatje, who started out as a poet, says plots often come to him as “a glimpse of a small situation.” His 1992 novel “The English Patient” started out as two images: one of a patient lying in bed talking to a nurse, and another of a thief stealing a photograph of himself.

Sometimes he goes through an “anarchic” stage, cutting out characters or rearranging scenes. “Some writers know what the last sentence is going to be before they begin—I don’t even know what the second sentence is going to be,” says Mr. Ondaatje, whose most recent novel, “Divisadero,” came out in 2007.

RICHARD POWERS

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Richard Powers, whose books are often concept-driven, intricately plotted and stuffed with arcane science, wrote his last three novels while lying in bed, speaking to a lap-top computer with voice-recognition software.

To write “Generosity,” his recent novel about the search for a happiness gene, he worked like this for eight or nine hours a day. He uses a stylus pen to edit on a touch screen, rewriting sentences and highlighting words.

“It’s recovering storytelling by voice and recovering the use of the hand and all that tactile immediacy,” Mr. Powers says of the process. “I like to use different parts of my brain.”

DAN CHOAN

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Dan Choan writes a first draft on color-coded note cards he buys at Office Max. Ideas for his books come to him as images and phrases rather than plots, characters or settings, he says. He begins by jotting down imagery, with no back story in mind. He keeps turning the images over in his mind until characters and themes emerge.

His most recent novel, “Await Your Reply,” which has three interlocking narratives about identity theft, started out as scattered pictures of a lighthouse on a prairie, a car driving into the arctic tundra under a midnight sun and a boy and his father driving to the hospital at night with the boy’s severed hand, resting on ice. He described each scene on a card, then began fleshing out the plotlines, alternating among blue, pink and green cards when he moved between narratives.

During the early stages of writing, he carries a pocketful of cards with him wherever he goes; as they accumulate, he stores them in a card catalogue that he bought at a library sale. It often takes two years before something resembling a novel takes shape. He eventually transcribes the cards onto the computer and writes furiously from 11 p.m. to 4 a.m.

“I used to think my average as a short story writer was one completed story out of every 20,” says Mr. Choan, who adds that his average has improved as he’s gained experience . “I have at least two novels that I think are dead—maybe three if the thing I’m working on right now sputters to a stop.”

KATE CHRISTENSEN

Kate Christensen was two years and 150 pages into her first novel, “In the Drink,” about a boozy ghostwriter, before she discovered what the book was really about—so she dismantled the draft, threw out a bunch of pages and started over. The process repeated itself with her second, third and fourth novels, she says. With her 2009 novel “Trouble,” a story about two women who go on a Thelma and Louise-like adventure to Mexico, the opening finally stuck. Ms. Christensen, who works out of her home in Tribeca, says a lot of her writing time is spent “not writing.” Most mornings, she does housework, writes emails and talks on the phone to avoid facing her work. In the past, she’s played 30 games of solitaire before typing a first sentence.

Last month, she started a new novel, titled “The Astral,” about a 57-year-old poet in Greenpoint, Brooklyn, who has been kicked out by his wife and is trying to get his son out of a mind control cult. “At the beginning, which is where I am now, there is always a certain amount of trepidation because the thing doesn’t have a life of its own yet,” says Ms. Christensen, who won the PEN/Faulkner Award last year.

MARGARET ATWOOD

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“Put your left hand on the table. Put your right hand in the air. If you stay that way long enough, you’ll get a plot,” Margaret Atwood says when asked where her ideas come from. When questioned about whether she’s ever used that approach, she adds, “No, I don’t have to.”

Ms. Atwood, who has written 13 novels, as well as poetry, short stories and nonfiction works, rarely gets writer’s block. When ideas hit her, she scribbles phrases and notes on napkins, restaurant menus, in the margins of newspapers. She starts with a rough notion of how the story will develop, “which usually turns out to be wrong,” she says. She moves back and forth between writing longhand and on the computer. When a narrative arc starts to take shape, she prints out chapters and arranges them in piles on the floor, and plays with the order by moving piles around.

Twice, she’s abandoned books after a couple hundred pages, one in the late 1960s and another in the early 1980s. She was able to salvage a single sentence from one book, and carved two short stories out of the other, including one titled “The Whirlpool Rapids.”

During a career that has spanned more than 40 years, Ms. Atwood has gone from cutting and pasting passages with scissors and tape to the communication of the electronic age. Lately, she’s been blogging and using Twitter while on tour promoting her recent novel, “The Year of the Flood.”

EDWIDGE DANTICAT

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Before she begins a novel, Edwidge Danticat creates a collage on a bulletin board in her office, tacking up photos she’s taken on trips to her native Haiti and images she clips from magazines ranging from Essence to National Geographic. Ms. Danticat, who works out of her home in Miami, says she adapted the technique from story boarding, which filmmakers use to map out scenes. “I like the tactile process. There’s something old-fashioned about it, but what we do is kind of old-fashioned,” she says.

Sometimes, the collage grows large enough to fill four bulletin boards. As the plot becomes clearer, she culls pictures and shrinks the visual map to a single board.

Right now, Ms. Danticat has two boards full of images depicting a seaside town in Haiti, the setting for a new novel that takes place in a village based on the one where her mother grew up.

She writes first drafts in flimsy blue exam notebooks that she orders from an online office supply store. She often uses 100 exam books for a draft. “The company I order from must think I’m a high school,” she said. She types the draft on the computer and begins revising and cutting.

Finally, she makes a tape recording of herself reading the entire novel aloud—a trick she learned from Walter Mosley—and revises passages that cause her to stumble.

JUNOT DÍAZ

“I think 90% of my ideas evaporate because I have a terrible memory and because I seem to be committed to not scribble anything down,” says Junot Díaz. “As soon as I write it down, my mind rejects it.”

Juggling everything in his head has drawbacks, one of which is writing very slowly, he says. He threw out two earlier versions of his novel, “The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao”—the equivalent of about 600 pages—before the final version began to take shape. He also researches obsessively. When writing “Oscar Wao,” he read J.R.R. Tolkien’s “Lord of the Rings” trilogy half a dozen times to get inside the head of his protagonist, an overweight Dominican teenager who’s obsessed with fantasy and science fiction.

He often listens to orchestral movie soundtracks as he writes, because he’s easily distracted by lyrics. When he needs to seal himself off from the world, he retreats into the bathroom and sits on the edge of the tub. “It drove my ex crazy,” he says. “She would always know I was going to write because I would grab a notebook and run into the bathroom.”

AMITAV GOSH

Amitav Ghosh’s first novel ended in failure. He was in his mid 20s, doing research on agricultural development at a think tank in Kerala, India. He worked on the first draft for a year. “It was terrible and I had to throw it all away,” he says. He’s since written six novels, including “Sea of Poppies” and “The Glass Palace,” but the process is always fraught.

“It never gets easier; it’s always hard, it’s always a test,” says Mr. Ghosh, who splits his time between Goa, India, and Brooklyn, N.Y. “I’ve reached a point in my life where if a sentence seems easy, I distrust it.”

Mr. Ghosh writes by hand, then types a manuscript onto his laptop. Every morning, he revises what he wrote the day before. Every sentence that appears in his books has been through at least 20 revisions, he says.

Mr. Ghosh, who is now working on the sequel to “Sea of Poppies,” which is part of a trilogy, is particular about everything from his pen to the type of paper he writes on. He insists black ink Pelikan pens are the best, and buys white, lined paper from a French manufacturer. “If you work on paper so much, you get obsessive about even the spacing of the lines,” he says. “I need them to be fairly widely spaced.”

RUSSELL BANKS

Russell Banks, a novelist who lives in upstate New York, writes nonfiction essays and reviews on his computer, but “gets blocked” if he tries to write fiction that way. He scribbles out his first drafts in longhand, working from 8 in the morning until 1:30 in the afternoon in a small writing studio. His studio, a converted sugar shack that was once used for boiling maple syrup, sits in a wooded area about 1,000 yards from his house.

His novels sometimes start out as a single sentence or phrase. As the story unfolds, he types up a rough outline that encompasses the whole plot, and a shorter, more detailed outline that maps out what’s going to happen in the next 10 or 20 pages. “It keeps me from falling off a cliff,” says Mr. Banks, whose books include “Affliction” and “The Sweet Hereafter,” both novels.

He types his manuscripts onto the computer once he has a full draft, and goes through countless revisions.

Currently, Mr. Banks is about halfway through a novel set in Miami.

COLUM MCCANN

When he’s in the middle of a novel, Colum McCann sometimes prints out a chapter or two in large font, staples it together like a book, and takes it to Central Park. He finds a quiet bench and pretends he’s reading a book by someone else.

Other times, when he’s re-reading a bit of dialogue or trying to tweak a character’s voice, he’ll reduce the computer font to eight-point Times New Roman. “It forces me to peer at the words and examine why they’re there,” Mr. McCann wrote in an email message.

Changing the way the words look physically gives him more critical distance, he says.

To research his 2009 novel “Let the Great World Spin,” which is set in New York in the 1970s and is a finalist for the National Book Award, Mr. McCann went on rounds with homicide and housing cops, read oral histories of prostitutes from the era and watched archival film footage.

The hardest moment often comes at the end of the project, when he’s emotionally spent and terrified that he’ll never be able to write another novel, he says. At such moments, he reminds himself of Samuel Beckett’s advice: “No matter. Try again. Fail again. Fail better.”

ANNE RICE

When she was working on her first novel, “Interview With a Vampire,” in the early 1970s, Anne Rice revised each typed page before moving on to the next. These days, she writes on a computer rather than a typewriter, and revisions are constant and more fluid. She writes a chapter a day to make sure each section is consistent in its tone and style, and often works for eight or nine hours straight when she’s in the middle of a novel. Sometimes, she’ll spend a year or two researching a book before she begins a full first draft.

She sets her font to 14 point Courier and double spaces the text on her 30-inch Mac computer monitor so that her field of vision is filled with words. “I find the bigger the monitor, the better the concentration,” says Ms. Rice, who is writing the third book in her trilogy about angels. She edits her work continuously, down to tiny copy-editing changes at the end. “Even after you’ve done all that, somebody out there will find a typo and think you’re a slob,” she says.

JOHN WRAY

To write “Lowboy,” which takes place in the New York City subway, Brooklyn-based novelist John Wray rode trains all over the city while pecking out a first draft on his laptop computer. He mainly rode the F, C and B trains, though “there was a time when I was really into the G,” he says. He often sat in a corner near the conductor’s booth with his headphones on. He worked like this, often for six hours a day, for nearly a year.

Initially, he wrote on the train not for research purposes, but to cut himself off from distractions like email and phone calls. Then the people and conversations he observed on the subway began to creep into the book, a novel about a paranoid schizophrenic teenager. One of the characters, a heavy-set homeless woman, is based on a woman Mr. Wray used to see at the Stillwell Avenue stop in Brooklyn. Bits of dialogue he overheard appear verbatim in the novel, including a strange conversation about how prospective homeowners should spend the night in a house before buying it in order to check the property for paranormal activity.

Writing on a noisy, crowded train was hard at times, but it was pleasant compared to the conditions under which he wrote his first novel, he says. In 1996, after losing his job in an art gallery, Mr. Wray lived in a tent in a rat-infested basement in Brooklyn’s Dumbo neighborhood. He wrote in the tent on an old 1940s typewriter. “I tried to approximate every cliché of the struggling novelist possible,” he says.

LAURA LIPPMAN

Mystery writer Laura Lippman, who writes a popular series featuring detective Tess Monaghan, creates elaborate, color-coded plot charts, using index cards, sketchbook pages, colored ribbon and magic markers.

The diagrams vary from book to book, but Ms. Lippman says she can tell a novel is off-track if her chart lacks symmetry.

She first used the technique on her ninth book, “By A Spider’s Thread,” which had two lines of action. She assigned a color to each point of view and made a chart with alternating blocks of color. For her novel “To The Power of Three,” which had seven different points of view, she bought seven different colors of ribbon and assigned a color to each character. Then she created a grid and strung colored ribbon representing each character between chapters where that character appeared, creating an intricate colored lattice.

Ms. Lipmann says she becomes “somewhat obsessive” about her charts.

“Every time I show people these things they seem to find them mildly disturbing,” she says.


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Posted by: worddreams | November 11, 2009

How to Write a Best Selling Novel

novelistAny read the Wall Street Journal article about how writers write?  They interview 17 popular authors on how they pen their best-selling books. Some write in the bathroom, others write on trains. A fascinating collection of ideas. Makes me seem positively normal (I sit in my office and go at it).

We got into a fascinating discussion about this on my LinkedIn  writers group. I came away thinking everyone has a different approach.

Do you do any of the methods used by the authors WSJ covered? If not, how do you do it? Share with us.

 

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Posted by: worddreams | November 10, 2009

The Road to Hell is Paved With Adverbs

From my fellow Writing Mommies, a few words of good advice:writers-block3

  • “If you require a practical rule of me, I will present you with this: Whenever you feel an impulse to perpetrate a piece of exceptionally fine writing, obey it–wholeheartedly–and delete it before sending your manuscript to press. Murder your darlings.” –Professor Ralph L. Wahlstrom, The Tao of Writing
  • “Write the book you want to read.” –Chuck Palahniuk
  • “Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader – not the fact that it is raining, but the feeling of being rained upon.” –E.L. Doctorow
  • “Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.” –Anton Chekhov
  • “Write as you speak.” –Joel Saltzman
  • “I’ve been given a lot of great advice over the years, but the one piece I remember best came years ago from Joe Klein, the wonderful political journalist who wrote “Primary Colors” and now writes for Time magazine. He said to me once, “Never throw away a single line.” In other words, really try to make every single line count. To this day, I think about Joe’s advice every time I write a story.” –Mike Geffner
  • “Write freely and as rapidly as possible and throw the whole thing on paper. Never correct or rewrite until the whole thing is down. Rewrite in process is usually found to be an excuse for not going on.” –John Steinbeck
  • “The idea is to write it so that people hear it and it slides right through the brain and goes straight to the heart.”–Maya Angelou
  • “At the risk of sounding persnickety, I think writer’s block is an indulgence. If you’re really going to do this thing, you have to put your butt in the chair and focus, and not expect the muse to fall from the sky and hit you in the head.” –Ellen Meister
  • “Technique holds a reader from sentence to sentence, but only content will stay in his mind.”–Joyce Carol Oates
  • “The road to hell is paved with adverbs.” –Stephen King
  • “If you don’t allow yourself the possibility of writing something very, very bad, it would be hard to write something very good.”–Steven Galloway
  • “Always write (and read) with the ear, not the eye. You should hear every sentence you write as if it was being read aloud or spoken.”–C. S. Lewis
  • “The main thing is to take a blank sheet of paper and write the first sentence. From that first sentence springs the second, by some miracle, and then the subject emerges – what the critics call the basic concept or the conception of the work.”–Valentin Katayev
  • “Successful writers are not the ones who write the best sentences. They are the ones who keep writing. They are the ones who discover what is most important and strangest and most pleasurable in themselves, and keep believing in the value of their work, despite the difficulties.” — Bonnie Friedman
  • “The reason 99% of all stories written are not bought by editors is very simple. Editors never buy manuscripts that are left on the closet shelf at home.” — John Campbell

 

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Posted by: worddreams | November 6, 2009

A Huge List of Writer’s Resources

I found this and briefly debated copying each link, but there are just too darn many. I took screen shots instead. Click the image to go to the source document:

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Posted by: worddreams | November 5, 2009

How to Describe Actions That Are Timeless

There are certain actions your characters participate in that are not tied to an era, a culture, or an event. They’re more likely to be dictated by the human essence, or nature. I’ve created a list of the ones that grab my attention. As with all of my lists, these come from books I’ve read, so be sure if you use them to rephrase to suit your particular character and plot:

  • turned to face him head-on
  • vaporized breath swirled around his headUntitled-80
  • breath spun whitely before vanishing in the chill
  • thick black wealth of her hair glistened as it swayed to her step
  • shook her head and gave a not-now look
  • kept his mouth shut and settled for a hard look
  • Chose the moment with care
  • sobs like hiccups
  • nodded his direction
  • making that connect-the-dots match-up
  • heaviness descended upon him
  • Adrenaline was like that. You could travel on the fumes
  • mouth-watering aromadscn7299
  • melted away like snow from a fire
  • by-now familiar reaction
  • tainted by a faint odor
  • fidgeting in the attempt to look at ease
  • ringing was growing in her ears
  • shifted uncomfortably
  • flexed one foot
  • pacing back and forth
  • moving from one foot to the other
  • shifted from one foot to the other
  • grunted as he shifted, trying to keep his ankles from paining him
  • stepping lightly
  • At first, she saw only an amorphous blotch, then head and shoulders. She could make out a face, but few details. She could hear coarse raspy breathingNjuguna - Stepping Lightly
  • prize out roots
  • forget where you put them
  • take on too many responsibilities
  • never went 40 seconds without smiling
  • walk with labored dignity
  • far too good-looking for a man who worked in close proximity to impressionable young women
  • his good mood lasted for 5 seconds
  • A symphony of movement
  • crouched by the fire
  • inhaling the steam, letting it sink into his pores, wishing that it would wash the horror away
  • when Tall Dark and Handsome crooked his finger…
  • exuded a dangerous qualitysaupload_maelstrom
  • remark came out of left field, and she could only stare at him
  • a sensation that the slightest mistake might let loose a maelstrom
  • the man’s cocked head, bland expression and curious smile
  • she looked uncertain
  • ran through him like a beam of sunshine
  • stood smiling in the midst of the miasma
  • boy and his dad, running around the track. I could distinguish father from son without looking. Dad, with measured soft steps, rolling heal to toe, son with the clump-clump of children falling forward, not bending from the knee, just plopping the foot to the ground and moving on. (I like the idea in this one of knowing your characters by their movements, not their appearance or voice)
  • my brain spun along in neutral, stunned, exhausted

 

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Posted by: worddreams | November 3, 2009

How to Make Your Plot Even More Interesting

You do it by adding fascinating snippets that intrigue the reader. Maybe it’s insider knowledge. Maybe it’s bits and pieces of real life that are stranger than fiction.

Or in this case, it’s a story that makes you say, “How could anyone be that dumb?” What a great way to make readers feel smart as they digest your novel.

Here’s one I couldn’t pass up.

Driver Crashes Into Cop Car While Texting

by Ally on Friday, October 23rd, 2009

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If one were creating a top ten list of things not to do, this would at least be in the top five.  Texting while driving is an act that even if it’s still legal in your state, it’s heavily frowned upon.  Even though it’s not illegal now, it just seems as if it’s going to become that way sometime in the somewhat near future.  Basically texting while driving is just asking for trouble.  Then if you manage to hit someone while you’re texting, you can bet that you’re going to get even more trouble.  If you somehow make things even worse and hit a cop car, you get to a whole new level of stupid.  Someone did actually manage to do exactly that.  In their defense though, I’m sure it’s quite difficult to notice a car with bright blue flashing lights.

David Mercer admitted that he was texting and didn’t see the idling cop car that had been parked to divert traffic around a car accident.  Luckily, the cop car was actually empty, so no one was actually physically injured.  Luckily for him, he lives in Rhode Island where it’s still technically not illegal.  There it’s still stupid, just not illegal.  He was cited with “failure to maintain control of his vehicle, obedience to devices, and no insurance”.  Sadly, there was no citation for just being a moron.  They really should work on that one, they could call it the Mercer citation.


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Posted by: worddreams | October 28, 2009

My Character is Sick–How to Show (Not Tell) Some Illnesses

Fiction writing is about communicating as much as possible within the story line. Every writing class you take will exhort you to show not tell. As Samuel Clemens said,

“Don’t tell us that the old lady screamed.
Bring her on and let her scream.”

You will often have your characters become sick in the novel. It creates drama. It helps the reader feel empathy for the protagonist or enmity for the antagonist. Maybe it serves the plot line. Here are some ideas you can use if your character is sick:

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  • Dark urine with a very strong odor.
  • Low urine output.
  • Dark, sunken eyes.
  • Fatigue.
  • Emotional instability.
  • Loss of skin elasticity.
  • Delayed capillary refill in fingernail beds.
  • Trench line down center of tongue.
  • Thirst. Last on the list because you are already 2 percent dehydrated by the time you crave fluids.

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Scorpions are all poisonous to a greater or lesser degree. There are two different reactions, depending on the species:

  • Severe local reaction only, with pain and swelling around the area of the sting. Possible prickly sensation around the mouth and a thick-feeling tongue.
  • Severe systemic reaction, with little or no visible local reaction includes respiratory difficulties, thick-feeling tongue, body spasms, drooling, gastric distention, double vision, blindness, involuntary rapid movement of the eyeballs, involuntary urination and defecation, and heart failure. Death is rare, occurring mainly in children and adults with high blood pressure or illnesses.

Treat scorpion stings as you would a black widow bite.

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Deaths from snakebites are rare. Snake venoms not only contain poisons that attack the victim’s central nervous system (neurotoxins) and blood circulation (hemotoxins), but also digestive enzymes (cytotoxins) to aid in digesting their prey. These poisons can cause a very large area of tissue death, leaving a large open wound. This condition could lead to the need for eventual amputation if not treated.

Bites from a nonpoisonous snake will show rows of teeth. Bites from a poisonous snake may have rows of teeth showing, but will have one or more distinctive puncture marks caused by fang penetration. Symptoms may be bleeding from the nose and anus, blood in the urine, pain at the site of the bite, and swelling at the site of the bite within a few minutes or up to 2 hours later.

Breathing difficulty, paralysis, weakness, twitching, and numbness are also signs of neurotoxic venoms. These signs usually appear 1.5 to 2 hours after the bite.

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See the image at the right for an image. After your character is stung, be sure to follow these instructions to relieve the itching and discomfort:

  • Cold compresses.
  • A cooling paste of mud and ashes.
  • Sap from dandelions.
  • Coconut meat.
  • Crushed cloves of garlic.
  • Onion.

Spider Bites

 

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Brown recluse spider bite

The black widow spider is identified by a red hourglass on its abdomen. The initial pain is not severe, but severe local pain rapidly develops. The pain gradually spreads over the entire body and settles in the abdomen and legs. Abdominal cramps and progressive nausea, vomiting, and a rash may occur. Weakness, tremors, sweating, and salivation may occur. Anaphylactic reactions can occur. Symptoms begin to regress after several hours and are usually gone in a few days.

The brown recluse spider is a small, light brown spider identified by a dark brown violin on its back. There is no pain, or so little pain, that usually a victim is not aware of the bite. Within a few hours a painful red area with a mottled cyanotic center appears. Necrosis does not occur in all bites, but usually in 3 to 4 days, a star-shaped, firm area of deep purple discoloration appears at the bite site. The area turns dark and mummified in a week or two. The margins separate and the scab falls off, leaving an open ulcer. Secondary infection and regional swollen lymph glands usually become visible at this stage. The outstanding characteristic of the brown recluse bite is an ulcer that does not heal but persists for weeks or months. In addition to the ulcer, there is often a systemic reaction that is serious and may lead to death. Reactions (fever, chills, joint pain, vomiting, and a generalized rash) occur chiefly in children or debilitated persons.

Tarantulas are large, hairy spiders found mainly in the tropics. Most do not inject venom, but some South American species do. If bitten, pain and bleeding are certain, and infection is likely. Treat a tarantula bite as for any open wound, and try to prevent infection. If symptoms of poisoning appear, treat as for the bite of the black widow spider.

I know. Not a lot, but these are the only illnesses my characters have come across in my novels so far. Would you share yours so we-all can develop a database?

 

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Posted by: worddreams | October 27, 2009

How I Would Characterize a Republican

republican elephantIf your novel is about a cross section of America, you must convincing portray characters from all segments of society. About 20% will be Democrats, 20% Republicans, and the rest, somewhere in the middle. Regardless of which politics you prefer, if your character is to be believed, you better walk a mile in those animal prints or your reader won’t read your book. Best to do it non-judgmentally, too, or you’ll get a big portion of the population angry.

I wrote a post on How to Character Liberals (i.e., Democrats). Here are some ideas on Conservatives:

  1. the purpose of Government is simply to provide for common defense of its citizens, and other basic tasks.
  2. prefer less government (fewer regulations protecting environment, business, etc.),
  3. prefer lower taxes.
  4. In short, they believe in survival of the fittest . . .
  5. give the people the power to make their own decisions, run their life. Keep government out of it
  6. Empathizes with the world and its problems, but wants each individual to strive to take care of themselves.
  7. Wants America to care about the world, but not for it.
  8. Thinks the American way of life is best for everyone in the world, but doesn’t force it on anyone (giving her/him a snobby, uncaring appearance)
  9. Is more likely to be pro-death penalty, against homosexual marriage, against gun control and pro life
  10. Is socially and fiscally conservative–not so openminded with other cultures, and definitely thinks people should spend only what they can afford, no matter the need
  11. Is in favor of lesser social programs, less-intrusive government and less government spending on social programs
  12. Likes business and capitalism and the idea that hard work is the way to success
  13. Answers questions with numbers and facts. Doesn’t believe that ‘numbers always lie’
  14. When s/he is asked a question, tries to honestly answer it and hopes to persuade the listener with all the data s/he has as proof
  15. When confronted with a ‘fact’ drawn from a quote or video which s/he doesn’t agree with, s/he can probably come up with the context and how s/he heard it, how it supports her/his opinion

Warning: This isn’t a judgment. These are qualities if found in a character  would make him/her authentic as a liberal and would make you like or dislike him/her (depending upon the part s/he plays in the story).

What do you think? Did I miss anything?

 

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