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Writers Tips #78: 8 Writing Tricks You Won’t Read Anywhere Else

I got these suggestions from an internet class I never signed up for. One day, they began arriving in my inbox, bit by bit for the full term of some college’s semester. Students submitted stories for grading, essays for peer review, questions to a discussion board of fellow-students. The anonymous professor had a down-to-earth approach to teaching that made sense to me. I found myself looking forward to her tips, then I copied them into my ‘How to Write’ folder. I’ve saved them all these years, and now I’ll share them with you.

BTW–If you’re the writer of these ideas, please send me a note so I can give you credit.

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THE POWER OF THREE

Three items in a series, separated by commas that create a poetic rhythm or add support for a point, especially when the items have their own modifiers.

“In those woods, I would spend hours (1)listening to the wind rustle the leaves, (2)climbing the trees and spying on nesting birds, and (3)giving the occasional wild growl to scare away any pink-flowered girls who might be riding their bikes too close to my secret entrance.” (Todd, college freshman)

THE SPICE OF FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE

Non-literal comparisons add “spice” to writing and can help paint a more vivid picture for the reader. Include examples of similes, metaphors, hyperbole, onomatopoeia, personification, symbolism, irony, alliteration, assonance, etc.

“When we first moved into the house on Orchid Street, I didn’t like it. My room was hot, cramped, and stuffy as a train in the middle of the Sahara. And the looming skeleton-like gray and white frame of the place scared me.” (Teri, grade 7)

THE EFFECTIVENESS OF DETAIL

Add vivid and specific information to your writing to clarify and create word pictures. Use sensory details to help the reader visualize the person, place, thing, or idea that you are describing.student

“It’s one of those experiences where you want to call a radio station and tell your problems to some guy who calls himself Dr. Myke, but how isn’t more of a doctor than your pet hamster is, one of those experiences where you want to read a sappy Harlequin novel and listen to Barry Manilow with a box of bonbons as your best friends, one of those experiences where you wouldn’t be surprised if someone came up to you and asked exactly what time yesterday you were born. Yeah, one of those.” (Ileana)

THE BAM! OF REPETITION

Repeat a symbol, sentence starter, important word, etc. to underline its importance.

“The veranda is your way only shelter away from the sister in bed asleep, away from the brother that plays in the tree house in the field, away from your chores that await you.” (Leslie)

THE POTENCY OF EXPANDING THE MOMENT

Take a moment that you would ordinarily speed past, and develop it fully to make your reader take notice.

“But no, I had to go to school. And as I said before, I had to listen to my math teacher preach about numbers and letters and figures…I was tired of hearing her annoying voice lecture about ‘a=b divided by x.’ I glared at the small black hands on the clock, silently threatening them to go faster. But they didn’t listen, I caught myself wishing I were on white sand and looking down at almost transparent pale-blue water with Josh at my side…I don’t belong in some dumb math class. I belong on the beach, where I can soak my feet in caressing water and let the wind wander its way through my chestnut-colored hair and sip Dr. Pepper all day long. “ (Shelly)

THE SURPRISE OF HUMOR

Whenever possible and appropriate, inject a little humor to keep your reader awake.

“He laughed?  I’m nothing. I’m the rear end of nothing, and the devil himself smiled at me.” (Andrew)

THE ORIGINALITY OF HYPHENATED MODIFIERS

When you connect two adjectives or adverbs together with a hyphen, it lends an air of originality and sophistication to your writing.

“She’s got this blond hair, with dark highlights, parted in the middle, down past her shoulders, and straight as a preacher. She’s got big green eyes that all guys admire and all girls envy, and this I’m-so-beautiful-and-I-know-it body, you know, like every other super model.” (Ilena)

SKILLFUL USE OF REPETITION: THE FULL-CIRCLE ENDING

When you include an image or phrase at the beginning of a piece of writing and then mention it again at the end, it gives your piece a sense of closure.

Beginning:
“Hey you, with the green and neon-orange striped shoelaces, you who always pulled my old frazzled white one in math. Hey you, who always added your versions of ‘art’ to my math problems for Mrs. Caton’s class so that 9 x 7 = 64 turned out to be a train with Puffs of smoke and two boxcars and made me get an 83 instead of a 93 since Mrs. C. doesn’t count locomotives as correct answers.”
Ending:
“Now Justin still sits behind me in math with his neon-green and orange striped shoelaces and pulls on my old white frazzled ones. He still draws zombies on my homework, but he hasn’t dumped another pitcher of Kool-Aid on me – – not yet at least. Oh, and by the way, in case you’re wondering, his first words when he opened his eyes were, ‘It was James Kenton who hid your clothes and made you walk around in a chicken suit…I’m not that mean.” (Liz)

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Jacqui Murray is the editor of a technology curriculum for K-fifth grade and creator of two technology training books for middle school. She is the author of Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy midshipman.  She is webmaster for five blogs, an Amazon Vine Voice book reviewer, a columnist for Examiner.comEditorial Review Board member for Journal for Computing TeachersIMS tech expert, and a weekly contributor to Write Anything and Technology in Education. Currently, she’s working on a techno-thriller that should be ready this summer. Contact Jacqui at her writing office or her tech lab, Ask a Tech Teacher.

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4 thoughts on “Writers Tips #78: 8 Writing Tricks You Won’t Read Anywhere Else

  1. Hi, Jacqui! I love stuff like this, pulled from files saved for years (or decades) that are still somehow relevant to us and what we’re doing–perhaps even more so than they were originally. Thanks for passing them along!

  2. We’re sympatico, Cheri. I was just over at your blog to see if you’d posted anything (even though I get your rss feed). Thanks for the kind words. How’s it with you? All good I hope!

  3. Hehe! Love your opening line, Jacqui! Sounds like the unsigned-for-internet-class at least provided you with some fun snippets to share! (Note my use of hyphenated modifiers there……)

    • It was the oddest thing. Normally, I would have just deleted them, but that three seconds I gave the email while my mouse was moving to the delete button caught my attention. The teacher had some pretty interesting posts. I found myself reading each one as they came in.

      Like getting a wrong number caller and ending up chatting with them. Serendipity.

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