When you read your story, does it sound off, maybe you can’t quite put your finger on it, but you know you’ve done something wrong? Sometimes–maybe even lots of times–there are simple fixes. These writer’s tips will come at you once a week, giving you plenty of time to go through your story and make the adjustments.
Today’s tip: Don’t Fear the Truth in Your Writing
I don’t read a lot of Erica Jong, but she hit this one right:
Jong admonishes aspiring writers not to expect approval for telling the truth, reminding them of Dante, Voltaire, Cervantes, and Swift. Then she adds: “Few are the great spirits who did not at one time or another write in jail, in exile, in the madhouse, or at the foot of the gallows.”
To be a unique writer, we must not be afraid to tell the truth as we see it. Many will disagree, but it’ll start the conversation. Who knows what happens then?
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Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. She is webmaster for six blogs, an Amazon Vine Voice book reviewer, a columnist for Examiner.com and TeachHUB, Editorial Review Board member for Journal for Computing Teachers, Cisco guest blog,Technology in Education featured blogger, IMS tech expert, and a bi-weekly contributor to Today’s Author. In her free time, she is editor of a K-8 technology curriculum, K-8 keyboard curriculum, K-8 Digital Citizenship curriculum, and creator of technology training books for how to integrate technology in education. Currently, she’s editing a thriller that should be out to publishers next summer. Contact Jacqui at her writing office or her tech lab, Ask a Tech Teacher.






































Writing truth not only tells us about ourselves, but presents to our readers and the world who we truly are. It is a tool for honoring what’s inside.
By: katelynchwrites on February 4, 2013
at 2:21 pm
Well said. I think it’s the core of our voice as a writer, what defines us to the reader.
By: Jacqui Murray on February 4, 2013
at 5:37 pm
If you write the truth from your heart, the reader can be really swept up in it. It’s amazing how many times I’ve read something and thought it doesn’t sound ‘true’ – great tip!
By: diannegray on February 4, 2013
at 3:06 pm
Absolutely. It’s tempting to write what the reader wants to read, but it doesn’t work. Bravely facing the abyss is the only chance at success.
By: Jacqui Murray on February 4, 2013
at 5:38 pm