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Writer’s Tip #10: Be Positive

When you read your story, does it sound off, maybe you can’t quite put your finger on it, but you know you’ve done something wrong? Sometimes–maybe even lots of times–there are simple fixes. I’ll point them out. They’ll come at you once a week, giving you plenty of time to go through your story and make the adjustments.  Please add comments with your favorite editing fixes.

Readers like to be uplifted, not depressed. They want to know how the heroine is going to win, not all the reasons they’ll fail. This doesn’t mean you should recreate Pollyanna–feel free to plot impossible problems. Just make sure your fans have a reasonable hope the protagonist can resolve them.

How do you set that mindset? Tell us what was/is, not what wasn’t/isn’t.

  • No: It wasn’t dark enough to hide her
  • Yes: She hid in the deepening shadows
  • No: She wasn’t impressed with his speech
  • Yes: She was bored with his speech

It gives power to your writing, makes your story upbeat rather than negative.

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3 thoughts on “Writer’s Tip #10: Be Positive

  1. One of my favorite ways to edit is to have my writing read back to me by text to speech software while playing a song that matches the tone of the scene…it’s fun and a great way to catch errors 🙂

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