When you read your story, does it sound off, maybe you can’t quite put your finger on it, but you know you’ve done something wrong? Sometimes–maybe even lots of times–there are simple fixes. I’ll point them out. They’ll come at you once a week, giving you plenty of time to go through your story and make the adjustments. Please add comments with your favorite editing fixes.
Don’t mitigate action with weakeners. These include:
- appeared to
- seemed to
These words give wiggle room to your writing and readers want to know you’re sure of your plot, characters, settings. For example:
- She became almost comfortable around him
- The truth almost overwhelmed her
- The changes were nearly immediate
I know–you really mean not quite. You’re uncomfortable being so absolute. Get over it. Readers want clarity and precision. They want you sure of yourself. Trust me–your novel will read be stronger with the changes.
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Jacqui Murray is the editor of a technology curriculum for K-sixth grade, creator of two technology training books for middle school and four ebooks on technology in education. She is the author of Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. She is webmaster for six blogs, an Amazon Vine Voice book reviewer, a columnist for Examiner.com, Editorial Review Board member for Journal for Computing Teachers, Cisco guest blog, IMS tech expert, and a bi-weekly contributor to Write Anything. Currently, she’s editing a thriller for her agent that should be out to publishers this summer. Contact Jacqui at her writing office or her tech lab, Ask a Tech Teacher.