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Writers Tip #89: 10 Tips from Janis Hubschman

When you read your story, does it sound off, maybe you can’t quite put your finger on it, but you know you’ve done something wrong? Sometimes–maybe even lots of times–there are simple fixes. These writer’s tips will come at you once a week, giving you plenty of time to go through your story and make the adjustments.

This list is from Janis Hubschman, brought to my attention by an efriend, Judith Marshall. Her stories have appeared in Michigan Quarterly Review, Exquisite Corpse, The Saint Ann’s Review and more. She’s a finalist in the New Letters Alexander Patterson Cappon Prize for Fiction and received an Honorable mention from Glimmer Train. Currently, she teaches at Montclair State University. You can reach her here.

Here’s the list:

  1. When the story stalls, ask: what is the character thinking now? Is she thinking anything? If not, why not? Characters need to learn something about themselves, about their values and assumptions.
  2. Characters reveal themselves under stress. Raise the stakes. Drive the character into a tight spot. What are the psychological crutches the character relies on under pressure?
  3. Readers like to learn about something when they read. The details of an unusual job or hobby, the day-to-day activities of a particular place at a particular time in history, for example, draw the reader in.
  4. Trust the reader. Remember Hemingway’s iceberg theory: “you could omit anything if you knew you omitted it and the omitted part would strengthen the story and make people feel something more than they understood.”
  5. Take apart successful published stories (or the stories of writers you admire) to see how they work.
  6. Give the character something to do in the scene. It brings the character and the scene to life. A character soaking in the bathtub, thinking about her rotten marriage is boring. A character performing brain surgery, thinking about her rotten marriage is a different proposition.
  7. To gain insight into a character, consider her history: Think about what happened before the story, what tortuous path led the character to this particular moment?
  8. Allow the character to misinterpret another character’s words or actions. In life, we often misread a situation, jump to conclusions. Interesting things can happen when characters make presumptions or project their own hang-ups onto others.
  9. Let the characters connect with others. Alienated characters, the whiney and self-absorbed protagonists that blame everyone else for their predicament have lots of precedent in literature, but can hold readers at a remove.
  10. Build tension by slowing down a scene. Let the scene unfold moment by moment. Linger on the details. Build silences into the dialogue.

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Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. She is the author/editor of dozens of books on integrating tech into education, webmaster for six blogs, an Amazon Vine Voice book reviewer, a columnist for Examiner.com and TeachHUB, Editorial Review Board member for Journal for Computing Teachers, monthly contributor to Today’s Author and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. 


24 thoughts on “Writers Tip #89: 10 Tips from Janis Hubschman

  1. Pingback: Writers Tip #92: How to Write Like a Pulitzer Prize Winner | WordDreams...

  2. I love Hubschman’s fresh ideas. She offers many interesting ways to consider how well we are writing. I’m doing what I hope is final editing of Mama, and will apply lots of these tips in my analysis. Thank you so much, Jacqui. You provide a valuable resource.


  3. These are all great, especially 2, 6, 8 and 10–adding tension when something’s wrong in a scene helps me. I used to not trust the reader by stating the obvious or revealing a mystery too soon.


    • One writer I follow said to add a fight scene whenever things slow down (this would be for thrillers). I did that, but it does require context and then I still had to build that. I’m not sure it worked well for me.


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