10 Beautiful Words That Have Enriched Me

nanowrimoI love words. I keep a list of about three hundred favorites, the ones that draw a mental picture that involves taste and feel as much as sight and sound. I browse them when I’m editing my mss, sometimes for inspiration but just as often as a reminder that writing requires a vast collection of great words.

I’d love to compare the average person’s vocabulary (approx. 17,000 words) to a writer’s. I’ve read that Shakespeare used only 15,000 words in all of his plays while Milton used barely 8,000. The problem of course: How many words do you have to sort through to find those perfect 15,000 or 8,000? Because those two gentlemen are about as perfect as a writer can be.

I’m working on a mid-level draft for my current WIP. I’m just about done with the plotting and will begin wordsmithing in about a week.That’s where words come in. I used to be comfortable neologizing words that would fit my story, but have been disabused of that habit (not fully disabused because I just verbized the noun ‘neologism’). Now I stick to words other people invented.

Here are ten you can actually use in your writing without sounding stuffy:

  1. abecedirian–means what it says–a beginner.Rudimentary. The abc’s.
  2. bandog–a large and fierce chained dog. This one’s appealing mostly because I love dogs.
  3. caliginous–murky, dark. Say it aloud. It sounds good.
  4. carabinieri–Italian national police force. This has a strength, a foreign power that I’ll probably never get to use because my characters aren’t going to Italy. I might have to plot a trip.
  5. cobble, as in ‘cobble together’. Can’t you just see that 1700’s cobbler tap-tapping at your plan, creating a beautiful mental quilt from scraps of disparate ideas
  6. confluence–a flowing together a coming together of people. ‘A confluence of events’. Comes after you’ve cobbled for a while.
  7. concatenation–interlinked series. MS Excel users know this word. It’s how you cobble together clues and discover a confluence of events. I love problem solving in quirky original ways.
  8. dappled–mottled, spotted. A dappled meadow, or horse. I see the dancing spots of brilliant color
  9. deus  ex machina–a powerful image of an unexpected problem-solver. I’ll get it into my writing eventually. So far, it’s sounded contrived.
  10. doppelganger–Alter ego. I know in my writer’s soul I can turn this ghostly double into a problem-solver.

You have to admit, these are cogent and pithy words. Let me know how you use them.

I write a lot about words. Here are some other articles:

I’m not the only one who writes about favorite words. Here are Yorick Reintjens’ 117 favorite words. Or Imgur’s list of 100.

–republished from Today’s Author.

Jacqui Murray is the author of dozens of books (on technology in education) as well as the popular Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. She is webmaster for six blogs, an Amazon Vine Voice book reviewer, a columnist for Examiner.com and TeachHUB, Editorial Review Board member for Journal for Computing Teachers, monthly contributor to Today’s Author and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. In her free time, she is  editor of technology training books for how to integrate technology in education which you can find on Structured Learning (a collaborative publisher).

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27 thoughts on “10 Beautiful Words That Have Enriched Me

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  2. I love words like these, but if I used them, everyone would know it wasn’t me writing the article. I try to keep things simple – like Mark Twain once said to tease Faulkner – ‘you will never need to use a dictionary….” 😆
    I like MBARKERSIMPSON’s idea to use them as writing prompts.


    • I notice a lot of thriller writers use a few ‘big’ words in their writing. As does George Will (political writer) and a variety of literary fiction standouts. I love when I need a dictionary (online, of course) for a few words, but not too many.

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  3. These words would make a great theme for a prompt challenge! Building a story around each one might be fun🙂 I have lists of words too – my favourites (which I look through often) are the words that make me chuckle or smile. Words like, and this is probably a British thing, ‘moist’ – it makes me laugh every time!


  4. I have come across many an example of this in fiction, including TV – without this label being applied. I used one myself in small way. I feel that if you name it you draw attention to what you are up to, which you may not want to do.


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