Poetry is not something I’m good at writing so I enjoy it vicariously through online friends like Audrey Dawn of Oldest Daughter and Red-headed Sister. I’ve been following her for several years and always find her poetry startlingly personal, quick peeks into a world ruled by emotion and heart. I’m way to structured for that so only enjoy it through someone else’s eyes.
To honor April’s National Poetry Month, here are fifteen tips from those who have no trouble delivering this concise-but-pithy form of writing:
- avoid cliches. Too often, they are unoriginal thoughts on a subject. Instead of using these pre-packaged descriptions, create your own. For example: Instead of
Hard as nails
use
Hard as _____________________
- rhyme with caution. It can become singsong. Beginners are (surprisingly) more likely to find success with free verse.
- describe something or someone–no plot necessary. Unless you’re writing Narrative Poetry or an epic poem like Beowulf, poems are more about characters, setting, or theme.
- make your poem a response to a line in someone else’s poem. This is a great way to get started (remember to credit the original poet).
- tap into your own feelings. Research, so often critical in novels, will not rescue a poem. Focus more on your personal take, your unique voice.
- use excited and exciting language, words that draw the reader in and keep them trapped in the world you’ve created.
- use sensory details.
- focus on the small–as in observations, events, activities, or consequences. Leave the big stuff (like War and Peace) for long long novels
- read lots (and lots) of poetry, especially the type you want to write.
- expand your vocabulary. Poetry is about using precise words that say a lot. In a novel, you get an entire scene to communicate an idea. Not true in a poem.
- don’t be afraid to write a bad poem. You’ll write a better one later.
- eliminate unnecessary words, phrases, and lines. Make every word count.
- titles are important. Make yours substantive, maybe even the poem’s first line.
- use your imagination. It’s your unique take on the world, why readers will fall in love with your poems.
- let readers interpret your work as they wish. There’s no right or wrong, just how it resonates with them.
If you’re a poet, what is your top tip for an aspiring writer? What made the biggest difference in your journey?
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Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. She is the author/editor of over a hundred books on integrating tech into education, adjunct professor of technology in education, webmaster for four blogs, an Amazon Vine Voice book reviewer, a columnist for TeachHUB, Editorial Review Board member for Journal for Computing Teachers, monthly contributor to Today’s Author and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. You can find her book at her publisher’s website, Structured Learning.
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My top tip for an aspiring poet would be to invest in a copy of John Frederck Nims’ Western Wind: An Introduction to Poetry. It made all the difference for me.
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I’m embarrassed to say I’ve never heard of that. But then, I taught tech rather than a grade level. I’m off to check on that.
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If you’re interested in reading it, I’d recommend that you look for a used copy. To buy it new is outrageously expensive. Since it’s used as a textbook, the publisher is price-gouging.
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My primary goal in life is to write at least one killer poem – so far they’ve been very mediocre but I’m hopeful! These tips will be very useful on my little quest so thank you so much for sharing!
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To me, writing poetry is one of the most difficult genres. I commend you!
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Those are some fantastic tips on writing poetry! I try to keep a lot of these in mind when I’m writing my own. Thank you for sharing.
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My pleasure. Glad you like them.
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Hi Jacqui! Per your earlier permission, I scheduled this article to be featured as a guest post on April 28th. As usual, it contains your credit/bio/link. Thanks!
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Absolutely. I’m honored, Ryan.
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I love to read poetry and write it. I find the economy of words refreshing and more to the point. My favorite poet is Kay Ryan. I love how her words start out in one place and emotionally carry you to another. It’s like a kid going down a slide at the park, so much fun you want to read again and again.
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Great description. Do you have a link for her? Or, I can Google her–that’s probably easier!
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Yes, google her. There’s lots of her writing on the web, but I love to read my Kindle Version of “The Best of Kay Ryan.” Here’s her poem Patience (which I need):
Patience is wider
than one once envisioned,
with ribbons of rivers
and distant ranges
and tasks undertaken
and finished with modest
relish by natives
in their native dress.
Who would have
guessed it possible
that waiting is
sustainable— a place
with its own harvests.
Or that in time’s
fullness the diamonds
of patience couldn’t be
distinguished from
the genuine in
brilliance or hardness.
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That is beautiful. I like the comparison between patience and diamonds.
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Hard as sails stretched full by the wind–that was the first thought that popped into my head. I was thinking of the sail’s reaction to the wind, but I don’t sail and have no idea if I’m off the mark or not. It follows with Andrew Reynolds’ line of thinking. The wind would make the sails stiff and unyielding.
Interesting post. Now I have several more ideas for making a character unique.
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That is a wonderful allusion, perfect for that sort of story. It could even fit my upcoming military/tech thriller.
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Reblogged this on quirkywritingcorner and commented:
National Poetry Month–let’s find some poems to share. ~ Connie
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Thanks for the reblog!
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Great tips, Jacqui. I’ve tried writing poetry over the years and will dip my toe in to a prompt or two when I have the time. But I’ve always struggled with it 🙂
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I have a few friends–efriends and real world–who write poetry. There’s some magic there they tap into I can’t. I’ll leave it to the experts.
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Me too!
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I heard a painter say yesterday that a painting is not a description; rather it is a feeling or expression. Don’t ask me what I have drawn. You decide what I have drawn. Each viewer is free to interpret it in a unique way. The same perhaps applies to poetry.
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I like that, Ankur. It’s true, too. In a novel, the plot tells you what’s going on. The poem is meant to be interpreted.
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Great tips Audrey but I think I’m going to leave the poetry writing to the experts.YOU. Thanks Jacqui for featuring my favorite poet.
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Don’t make me cry, Butch ♡ Thank you. *sniff* You’re such a softy!
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Tell me about it. 🙂
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Hugs!
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🙂
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There’s something special about Audrey, isn’t there? Yep…
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Yes there is. 🙂
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Poetry is the ULTIMATE flash fiction. Thanks Jacqui!
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Love that description, Judy.
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Thanks for posting! Great tips!
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My pleasure!
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Of all your wonderful posts giving useful writing advice, this is one I wouldn’t have expected from you. I’m not sure I’ve ever read a poem of yours. And yet, Jacqui, your guide to making poetry is an excellent beginning. A special gift of yours.
I write mostly from awe in reading others’ poems; my own is limited. Other folks provide better examples. However, I would add: write about what touches you deeply because your passion will show itself in your poem. The roses-are-red variety of poem came from needing a cheap rhyme. Leaves of Grass came from Walt Whitman’s ongoing observations and reflections of life.
Good poetry is close to one’s heart – the writer’s and the reader’s.
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You’re right, Shari–no poems in my repertoire. I recognize I’m more anomaly than norm so wanted to include this.
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Your poem, just recently shared on your blog, was one of the best I’ve ever read. Ever! And I’ve read poetry until I’m blue in the face, Ma’am.
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Oh my – I’m blushing. My ears are pinging. Thank you.
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I should have expected it, Shari. Your novels are deeply prosaic and lyrical.
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I don’t write poetry, so these tips are interesting to learn. Other than a humorous limerick here and there, I steer clear of it. I think I’m too concrete of a thinker to venture into the land of the poets.
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Me, too, though my students create a poetry book with all kinds of poetry in them. That’s as close as I get.
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Reblogged this on Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister and commented:
My friend, Jacqui, gives solid advice on writing every day on her site, Worddreams. Her tips, as an editor and accomplished author have often helped me strengthen my writing. I’m humbled with her mention of my poetry today and during April’s National Poetry Month. Her gift this morning brings a shine to my eyes and fuel to my journey. Thank you, Jacqui. ♡
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Thanks for the reblog, Audrey!
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You’re welcome, my friend!
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As a writer of poetry, I find inspiration from the unanswered questions I have during moments while thinking through an emotion I’m having.
What has made the biggest difference in my journey? Sharing my poetry with the public, friends and family. Allowing my heart to be seen. Positive feedback, heck even constructive comments, have helped me become better at expressing myself. Readers of poetry allow me to feel more comfortable with who I am as a writer.
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I am so not there yet, Audrey. That whole grinning through ‘constructive comments’ has me flumoxed. This is why I respect your work–it is heartfelt and often raw.
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A poet is often misunderstood, so we quickly learn to grin and say thank you. Possibly drink a bottle of whiskey and try again, for some.
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Well, that actually makes a lot of sense. “Suffering for their art” as the saying goes.
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You gave anyone interested in writing poetry such great advice. I learned right along with your readers. You’re a wealth of knowledge for any writer and I’m blessed to know you, Jacqui. Blushing. I’m honored to have been mentioned in your post. Thankful to have had your guidance and friendship.
Don’t mind me, I’ll be over there taking notes…it’s really hard not to use a cliché, you know. Smiles.
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I read a lot of poets online. You definitely stand out, Audrey.
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After being away for six months I’m just thrilled to read this comment. Thankful for your encouragement, Jacqui.
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Yeah, where were you? Did you think we wouldn’t notice??
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Good tips. In your first example the correct poetic phrase should be:
Hard as a cloud
As a poet I work to create an emotion or paint a scene. It’s more about metaphor than research. A good way to start is to work from a seemingly contradictory comparison. For example, why could a cloud be hard? Well not in the physical sense, but cloud can bring rain, snow or lighting. A cloud can hang over a conversation or relationship.
Clouds can also be light, fluffy, beautiful and bringers of life (water, snow).
Beginners should start with a feeling and just go from there. Don’t worry about form to start. You get to that in time.
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I’m looking forward to reading your poetry book, Andrew. The glimpses I’ve gotten of your poetics (I made that word up) tell me it will be well worth the wait.
‘Hard as a cloud’–that speaks volumes.
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“Hard as a cloud” Kind of words, doesn’t it. Well, now I have to write a poem…
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Thanks for the great tips, Jacqui!
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I grabbed these from efriends online. They make a lot of sense, don’t they?
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I used to write a lot of poetry from middle school all the way to the end of college. These are great tips.
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Poetry has always alluded me. Saying so much in so few words–can’t seem to accomplish that. No wonder I write novels.
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Thanks Jacqui – I admire poets that say so much with feeling. It’s an art .. I FB’d this post.
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Thanks for the FB share, Susan. I’m off to see what you have up for C, during this AtoZ Challenge month.
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