Man vs Nature / writing

How Great Fiction is Like Star Trek

I wanted to write a quirky article last year for Chris’ blog, The Story Reading Ape (I mean, when you start with that title, readers expect outside-the-norm, don’t you think?). That’s not too difficult for me because unusual fits my novels, mostly set within the rarely-read prehistoric fiction genre. My overarching theme–survival–might sound mundane in today’s world where man is king but in prehistoric days (one-two million years ago), we were always one encounter away from extinction. The mystery of how we survived a habitat filled with sabertooth tigers, massive tusked mammoth, and vicious proto-wolves almost as tall as us is why I began writing this genre. Add to that, our predecessors had puny teeth, dull nails, skin that could be sliced open with one swipe of a five-inch claw, rarely wore clothes, had yet to conquer fire, and had no idea what a number or a wheel was. Well, you see the problem with the simple goal of survival.

So each of my novels asks, How did we survive impossible circumstances?

Be patient, Trekkies. I’m getting to my Star Trek connection.

Earliest man had no idea how over-matched he was. If someone had told him, he probably would have hid underground like moles or scampered into the tallest trees like his ape predecessors. Instead, he stood upright, intent to boldly go where no man had gone before–

Wait. I can’t use that phrase. It’s Star Trek’s. In fact, this audacious statement is how Gene Roddenberry (Star Trek’s creator) built the sci-fi empire from something that lived only within his imagination into one of the highest-grossing media franchises of all time. Sound complicated? The shows actually followed fairly basic rules:

  1. The instinct to survive is king. Life does what’s needed to continue. Never underestimate the will to live.
  2. Don’t judge a character by his/her appearance. Star Trek often raised moral and social issues through non-humans who were as smart, devious, and focused as any human.
  3. When in Rome… That lesson never changes. No matter where you are in the Universe, the fantasy world, or history, the laws and culture of the land and people color everything. Treat them with respect.
  4. The Vulcan game of Kal-toh is a metaphor for survival. Tuvok explained the object of Kal-toh as “finding the seeds of order in the midst of chaos.” That theme was replayed over and over throughout Star Trek’s TV shows and movies.
  5. Imbue your fantasy world with truth. For example, the Romulan ships (and later the Klingons’) had cloaking devices. Well, a version of that already exists using metamaterials but so far, can hide only small items. Sometime in the future, it will grow into what Star Trek postulated. If you’re interested in metamaterials and hiding objects in plain sight, check out my thriller, To Hunt a Sub.
  6. Integrate fascinating trivia. For example, the Klingon warship in Star Trek was named after the original Wright Brothers plane, Bird of Prey.

What’s my message? The basics are fundamental to any story. Build a fictional world that readers want to inhabit and they’ll travel with you through one book, a trilogy, or an entire series.

Read my prehistoric fiction trilogies:

Set 1.8 million years ago. Lucy and her kind were the start of man, the first creatures to create tools, routinely walk upright, and solve problems they’d never encountered. But Lucy had thin skin, no claws, and tiny teeth–pretty defenseless in a world of sabertooth cats and thick-hided mammoth. There was no reason to believe she’d survive much less thrive. In Dawn of Humanity, I show you how she took control of her world. Book 1, Born in a Treacherous Time, is published. Book 2, Laws of Nature, will be available July 10th and Book 3, Natural Selection, Winter 2022.

Set 850,000 years ago, a time in prehistory when man populated most of Eurasia. He was a violent species, fully capable of addressing the many hardships that threatened his survival except for one: future man, a smarter version of himself, one destined to obliterate all those who came before.

  • Savage Land (not available yet)

Set 75,000 years ago, a time when Nature should have won the battle and man should have become extinct. But we survived. Cro Magnon man had a bigger brain than even modern man, sophisticated tools, and advanced weapons. Unlike any before him, he buried his dead, had forms of art, decorated his body, and is considered by some to be a sub-species of modern man. 

#startrek #trekkies #amwriting


Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular prehistoric fiction saga, Man vs. Nature which explores seminal events in man’s evolution one trilogy at a time. She is also the author of the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers and Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. Her non-fiction includes over a hundred books on integrating tech into education, reviews as an Amazon Vine Voice,  a columnist for NEA Today, and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. Look for her next prehistoric fiction, Laws of Nature, July 2021.

58 thoughts on “How Great Fiction is Like Star Trek

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  2. I’m a Star Trek fan, Jacqui. I might have watched the same episodes more than once throughout the years. I visited the studio and watched the demonstrations of Hologram, beaming, and the model size of Star Trek. When I watched the show and realized the techniques behind the filming, it didn’t distract me. I was glad that the reality of science and technology eventually caught up with fiction though. Great post!

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  3. Regardless of the era and setting, I’m coming along for the ride if I get invested in the characters and their problems. Great analogy, Jacqui!

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  4. @Robertawrites even me l like that line of Star trek.what an amazing woman writer is that??.
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    Please may I know your name and where you are located??

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  5. I’m very happy about you and your writings.
    As you can see I am journalist, television and radio presenter.but today I want to writing because so many people had been saying about you and your good writing and I didn’t not believe but I nearly see it with my two naked eyes.may God bless you more and abundantly.sorry for not commenting you yesterday because yesterday is our Celebration and birthday.
    Did you understand me??

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  6. Good story telling is the key. Star Trek writers have always been good at writing good stories. When you are “world building” the world must have a compelling world. Star Trek always fell short for me in regards to it’s lack of cats. Expect for Data’s kitty, Spot.

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  7. They say there are only so many plots and surviving (in one form or another) is the core of all of them, I think. But you’ve captured some other core components of a great story, especially relatability of the characters and world, even if the story takes place far in the future or far in the past. A fun post!

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  8. Good thoughts. I remember reading (nearly 4 decades ago) a book titled “The Tangled Wing: Biological Constrants on the Human Spirit.” One quote sticks with me and I hope I get it right as I’m not sure what happened to my book: “It’s not stress that kills you, it’s the ability to handle stress that allows you to live.” Endurance, whether by our prehistoric ancestors or those in the future, seems to allow great things to happen.

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  9. I’m not a trekkie but I know enough about it (other members of the family love it) to know what you say is true.
    P.S. I’d rather read one of your books than watch Star Trek. 🙂

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  10. Love your Star Trek analysis – what an inspiriation it had been to scientists and inventors too, so many things postulated in the ST universe begged for someone to ‘,ake it so’ – and they did!

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  11. Live long and prosper!! Hubby watches Star Trek all the time, all versions and all movies too. I often notice basic rules of life and some good lessons as well. In fact, the crew of Star Tek is often used as a good business modal. Great post!!

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