This post is for Alex Cavanaugh’s Insecure Writers Support Group (click the link for details on what that means and how to join. You will also find a list of bloggers signed up to the challenge that are worth checking out. The first Wednesday of every month, we all post our thoughts, fears or words of encouragement for fellow writers.
This month’s question — When you set out to write a story, do you try to be more original or do you try to give readers what they want?
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This question’s answer in my case is a mix of both. I write prehistoric fiction which is a niche genre. That means anything I write tends to be unique, original, and fresh. The disadvantage is that not many read or write it, but the advantage is, those drawn to these storylines find me and hopefully read all of my books (because there isn’t much competition).
That doesn’t mean I can get lazy as a storyteller, though! I must give readers what they expect from any great historical fiction piece or they won’t finish the book. This includes:
- The story includes lots of factual historical events that are fundamental to the plot and characters.
- Characters are based on real people, the plots on real-life events. They just happen to have occurred in a time before history was recorded in anything other than rocks and bones.
- My stories like all good stories rely on a series of problems that are solved only to beget more serious problems–rising action, turning points, reactions, and a final climax.
- The story revolves around a main character who experiences significant change over the course of the novel.
- S/he has an interesting (hopefully) cast of supporting characters to keep readers intrigued.
- Setting is treated almost like a character which is why the series is called Man vs. Nature. Back in prehistoric times, early man’s actions were determined as much by Nature as personal goals.
Let me know in the comments what you think.
I’m eager to read what you-all have to say about your writing.
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Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular prehistoric fiction saga, Man vs. Nature which explores seminal events in man’s evolution one trilogy at a time. She is also the author of the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers and Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. Her non-fiction includes over a hundred books on integrating tech into education, reviews as an Amazon Vine Voice, a columnist for NEA Today, and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. Look for her next prehistoric fiction, Natural Selection, Fall 2022.
I’ve written books that I’d like to read, something that is different and not common, which is why I really enjoy your books, Jacqui. Unique and well-researched vistas 🙂
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We write the same way, Luciana. We have a passion for a particular time in history and that’s our era. I love that.
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I am very much looking forward to reading your newest adventure for Lucy 🙂
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I think both is a good approach, Jacqui. We have to be original while, at the same time, following the “rules” about what makes a book compelling. A book without one or the other tends to fall flat for me. Great answer to the question, and I liked your list. 🙂
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That is so true. I tried to write completely my way decades ago when I started. It didn’t work well. Even I was bored!
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I think writing should be a bit of both however I agree that if you hook someone and you have hooked me, Jacquie I have just finished “The Crossroads Trilogy” and now downloaded “To Hunt a sub” after that and 24 hrs I will be back to Man v Nature between Diana and Meeks plus you, Jacqui my reading is mapped out for the foreseeable and most enjoyable 🙂
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You have made my day, Carol. Thank you for the kind words! While my prehistoric fiction may sound completely different than the thrillers (like To Hunt a Sub), they both focus on moral people who are problem solvers with an internal drive that won’t allow them to quit. They are not as dissimilar as they sound! Thank you so much for reading them.
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Thank you, Jacqui… I am looking forward to reading To Hunt a Sub… I don’t like womens fiction and find novels which use crude words(a lot) not something I want to read.. Its good to find books like yours 😀
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I agree, hadn’t thought of that with my books (as a selling point!). Thanks for pointing it out.
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Have I mentioned, I love your characters and how you develop them. They are strong compassionate women.
Enjoy what’s left of the weekend.
😉 Hugs
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Thanks, Sandra! I’m researching–what a great day.
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I write about what inspires me, with the hope that my writing will inspire others. ❤ xo
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Your poetry about Maine–your book about butterflies–they do.
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Hugs! Have a sensational week, Jacqui!
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Same.
I write fantasy set in the very ancient world because that happens to be the setting that holds my interest long enough for me to do the research and write the novel.
Maybe I should try writing “what readers want.” Not sure I’d be very good at it tho … 😉
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You write pretty much what I do, Jennifer. I love it! I would stick with it as long as it holds your interest.
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Thank you for sharing!!.. obviously I am not a writer or author but when I do write something (blog, poem, etc.) I let my fingers do the walking and my heart do the talking and it is what is is… should I make it public it will be up to the reader to decide whether it is worth a second glance or put in File 13 (garbage)… 🙂
Until we meet again..
May love and laughter light your days,
and warm your heart and home.
May good and faithful friends be yours,
wherever you may roam.
May peace and plenty bless your world
with joy that long endures.
May all life’s passing seasons
bring the best to you and yours!
(Irish Saying)
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File 13… I like that
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I think any writer is driven by the reader no matter what the subject of the writing is. We’re reaching out to “touch” others in a way that is unique to only those who love communicating with written words. Yet, the passion of the craft come from us writing for ourselves without a thought about what the reader wants. Visual art and music are fields that had the same paradox.
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You hit on a good point, Glynis. Finding the exact right words feels like nothing else.
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Sorry am a little late to yr posts. My laptop has been throwing up a ‘Dangerous website blocked’ sign by Norton every time I clicked on it. Strangely, the same Norton has been sending me messages for over 6 months saying I am not protected by Norton and I shd renew. Finally I decided to override the warning and here I am 🙂
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That is odd because this is run by WP.com I actually had to fix my other websites to get rid of that problem, but this one should have been fine. Well, I’m pretty sick of Norton. I get about ten warnings a day emailed to me about a service I don’t have. Grr!!
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You too huh?
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What is wrong with them? I would never use that product after how they harass me.
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Yo escribo para mi. Te mando un beso.
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I suppose those under contract–like Harlequin writers–do otherwise (and that’s not a bad thing, just an observation) but I think the majority of us Indies write for ourselves.
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Those are all good story points with the majority of them being necessary for any fiction writing. I write fantasy adventure stories for me because that’s what I love. Being in that genre, they do include magic and/or swordplay, which the reader would expect, so in that way, it’s giving the reader what they want.
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I’ve read at least one of yours and I agree. It was exciting!
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Thanks, Jacqui!!
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Good for you Jacqui. You have a niche that specializes and gathers its own following. That’s something we all hope for in our writing. Me, you know, I write from heart and experience. I’m mostly a nonfiction girl. 🙂
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But you too have that niche–sharing your raw emotion, solutions to problems lots of people don’t know how to talk about. That’s pretty darn important.
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Thanks Jacqui. Yes, isn’t it wonderful what a bunch of diverse writers we are! 🙂
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A lot of thought, research, and talent goes into your novels, Jacqui! I guess if an author wants to sell books, the reader is important and needs to be accounted for within the writing. Or, the style/genre elements, at least, have to be met. Great answer to the question!
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Well said, Liesbet. I do know folks who write for a family legacy. That makes sense and is understandable. Other than than, writing a full-length book is a lot of work!
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At this point, all I write are blog posts. I think they are mostly for me, to share my experiences, writing and photography with others. However, we don’t write in a vacuum. If our writing appeals to others, they respond and we form a relationship. That, to me, is the importance of blogging.
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I follow a few writers who mostly (read that: only) blog. I love it. They have some of the most fascinating posts I read all week.
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I have tried my hand at fiction and finished two books, but not to the point they are publishable. The only book I’ve had published was solicited because of my blog. I did a post on a 100-year-old hardware store and it’s nearly that aged owner. Arcadia Publishers contacted me and asked me to do a photo book of Woodlake. It was a real challenge and a lot of fun. But my love is blogging.
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How very cool. I just checked your blog for info on the book–missed it somehow!–but did see you are a teacher. I feel that.
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I loved teaching, and it stays with you. My writing is more didactic than creative. LOL.
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Love that you aim for a healthy mix that arises organically out of your niche and storyteller abilities. 🙂
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I do–not sure I always achieve it, but it’s a worthwhile goal. Thanks, Jaya.
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I’m the same way, Jacqui. I write the type of book and style that like to read as well as characters and topics that interest me. Bu I’m always mindful of how my readers might respond. For example, are the characters relatable in some way, or are there too many? Are the plot and resolution realistic? Are there too many subplots? I pare down a great deal because I don’t think readers will want or need to know as much as I write in early drafts.
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That sounds really good. I especially like that those could end up novelettes or stories that go along with the novel.
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Yes, one of the great things about a series is that you can write short stories or novellas about specific characters, which adds to depth and offers background that doesn’t quite fit in the larger books.
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And once you hook them with great writing and story, they’ll keep coming back for more 🙂
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That’s the hope, innit?
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This is definitely a unique niche, good for you! Alex does ask the best questions. Having read several other posts, I feel I should have been more specific about what my genre readers expect. Oh, well. 🙂
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I really enjoy reading the posts on Alex’s topics. We are all so different.
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When you wrote prehistoric fiction, I thought of Clan of the Cave Bear. That’s a unique time period. Write a good story and the readers will come. How’s that for a paraphrase? Have a great month.
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That IS a good paraphrase! Jean Auel did that like no other. Sigh.
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I love this: “They just happen to have occurred in a time before history was recorded in anything other than rocks and bones.”
I guess I mostly write what I want. 🙂
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And, dare I say, your passion for education. That’s a great focus.
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It does keep me focused. I love children. They are wonderful to write about. 💖
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That is one thing I miss about teaching on a campus. I used to start smiling the moment I set food on the school grounds.
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I know just what you mean. 🙂
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Very interesting, Jacqui – I love how you focus on that one fascinating genre. I think it’s one that many people would be interested in but don’t think to look for it. It’s especially relevant for people interested in nature and the environment. Toni x
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So true. It shares a lot of traits with the superheroes of thrillers but not the technology.
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I am always writing what I want (ie the story that wants out of my mind). The only exception (partial exception) is when I participate in a short story contest, which already has a theme and I have to write something on that subject. But even then, if I am not inspired by that theme, I cannot write – and it has happened to me to give up good contests for this.
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Agreed, Marina. My first creative writing class, I had to write on topics that didn’t inspire me. Not my thing.
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Hi Jacqui, a most interesting question and one I often consider. I don’t write to please ordinary readers. I decided that this week when I was having a conversation with a friend. I write because I have something to say and I want to say it my way. It rather my books and thoughts reached a limited audience and conveyed exactly what I intend to say, than they reached thousands of readers and said nothing or a dumbed down version of what I what to say. I suppose that is rather arrogant of me, but that is why I write. My friend said I was a pen activist. I rather like that.
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That’s an interesting term–pen activist. That is a clever twist on the term. You do write on a lot of important topics, but my favorite of all yours is your cooking and reading stories, with Sir Chocolate. Such a great way to interact with children.
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Hi Jacqui, I like those too. I have a new children’s book coming out soon which is a bit longer. I really like it and hope children do too.
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This was a good question and your genre is quite unique indeed – sounds like you have found your groove with it and with giving readers what they want
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Thanks, Yvette! I do love exploring
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I have never attempted to write a story because it is trending. I write from the heart and always hope some will enjoy it. Great question!
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Agreed. I wish I could, but it just doesn’t work for me.
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Great post, Jacqui! Any writer who wants to sell commercially absolutely must consider the reader. And that doesn’t mean being a write-to-market hack. It means creating an interesting world with interesting people doing interesting things. Otherwise, what’s the point? And the conflicts, man v. man, man v. nature, man v. himself are universal. Excellent insights!
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What IS the point? Without those characteristics, I’d get bored with my own writing!
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I agree with everything your said in your post, except one statement. It has me confused: “Characters are based on real people, the plots on real-life events.” What kind of real-life events are we talking about in prehistoric fiction? We don’t know what happened then? Are you talking realistic vs. fantastic? Something that could’ve happened?
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I researched early tribes, great apes, survivalists, natural navigation–that sort. All of those gave me a sense of how our predecessors survived their rugged world.
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I don’t have much experience giving an informed response, but I think it has to be both. I would never want to write just for readers because it’s important to be true to myself. How often have we heard the axiom, “Write what you know.” At the same time, how can a writer not pay attention to their readers?
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In your case, as you write a YA novel, you’re probably considering the YA readers as you write, making a story that will appeal to them, not adults, or some other age group.
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I am on board with what you just said. I write a mix too. It seems like the books I like to read should be something I can relate to. I try to do the same for others as I write.
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Absolutely. Agreed, Erika.
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I think the prehistoric niche sounds very interesting! I like that you address the points that you anticipate a reader would expect from this particular genre while remaining true to what you expect from yourself.
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Thank you! It’s complicated in such an under-written genre!
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Good question. I try to mix both but focus on original
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Alex comes up with the best questions.
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Thank you for the points to be included in historical fiction. With true facts in the story, the reader’s experience is much richer. And I know you love researching those golden nuggets to include in the book.
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I have been waiting six months to start my next research. I am so excited to start!
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i love your story breakdown, it can be used as a basis for most stories – it’s the details, characters, and settings that make them unique. and I love your prehistoric niche!
terrific!
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Thanks, Tara. I’m glad you liked them!
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I agree, most readers want a good story, so we gotta give it to them, right?
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That’s how I am as a reader!
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You’ve definitely found your niche in prehistoric fiction. You do an amazing job of capturing the time period. Can’t wait for the next one. Hint. Hint;)
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I love that era. Man had to get along with all species because we weren’t the Alphas. That’s not a bad thing.
I may have that book ready for you in a few weeks. All is going well!
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The trick to being successful in any genre, Jacqui, is to know that genre (and its narrative conventions) intimately — so you can deliver on reader expectations, yes, but also on occasion subvert them! So, for instance, in my genre, horror, a movie like Scream succeeds because it does both: satisfies the conventions of the genre but also upends them — to supremely satisfying effect!
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Absolutely true and so hard to do! Glad you pointed that out, Sean.
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I think that lately (maybe the last couple of years?) I write for myself but even then, especially on my blog, I think I wind up doing things I hope readers will like as well. I need to kick it all up a couple of notches, though.
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Your blog is very approachable. I can see myself sitting in your backyard chatting with you. That’s a nice feeling.
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Awww…Thank you.
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I hadn’t considered that your category had less competition that some others, but you are up against Auel and holding your own! Very well, I might add.
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It helps she doesn’t write anymore! There are a few other biggies but most general readers don’t know about them.
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I still write only for myself! I wish I could write for the readers too. 😊
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That seems to be the same thing as far as I can tell from your writing. You speak what is in so many minds.
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Not a lot of competition is a good thing! Keep writing what you love.
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It has surprised me how true your words are, Alex.
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Hi Jacqui – not writing stories … I concentrate on interesting the readers to my blog – keeps me happy – and keeps friends popping over – thank you!! Cheers Hilary
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I like that, Hilary. I’ve noticed when blog buddies don’t stop in at least a few times a month, I worry about them.
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I don’t get to write as much as I want while traveling. Silence is a huge part when it comes to productive writing for me. I’m currently lacking that silence and would love some of that to finish the sequel 😀
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I love quiet, too–no music, no noise of a coffee shop. I know what you mean!
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I agree there are certain expectations in some genres, like prehistoric fiction. But you can still be unique in your story telling while following them.
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That is so true, and what makes me return over and over to some authors. Good point, Natalie.
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I think it is a bit of both. I wanted to write about my travels. But I needed to write them in a way that would catch readers’ interest. Writing from the point of view of a twelve-year-old girl made it more exciting.
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It sure does, Darlene, and there aren’t a lot of travel books for that age group. Well done!
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Yes, there is a structure to a delightful story with all the elements you have mentioned. If I don’t feel it, I can’t write it. My editor calls me a genre buster because my story like Einstein’s Compass does not fit in one box. Amazon and search engines need the box for algorithms. Oh well, I write to inspire and entertain. I do my best to follow the writing rules of fiction, but you know sometimes I gotta break the rules. My fans are beginning to want more of my work. Also, the rules of writing and publishing change like the wind in the sails of the ship. Navigating the fickle sea of what is skillful writing and publishing can affect how books are written and published. For example, indie authors are driving the book market more than ever. Our creative work is making traditional publishers merge their big publishing houses. The doors to libraries and big box stores like Barnes and Noble are opening to sell our books. So, I say write what is in your heart. Then find a good editor and make it work. Who knows, the box you write in could stretch, like spandex and be more fun.
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Genre buster–love that term! Your book is definitely a balance of so many genres. Waiting to hear how the potential movie deal goes.
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You will be one of the first people I tell of what happens in Hollywood with Einstein’s Compass.
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I write fiction to find the emotional truth of characters’ inner lives, first for myself (because I HAVE to know), then to share with readers. With readers in mind when I revise, I cut a lot of scenes and chapters that don’t drive the book forward.
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That is interesting, Liz. Me, my writing is to understand history–completely different than the person. Thanks for sharing that.
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You’re welcome, Jacqui. I took a lot of history courses in college because I wanted to learn what people’s lives (outer and inner) were like during time periods other than my own.
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There’s so much more there than just the passage of time, isn’t there?
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Absolutely! Layers and layers and layers of complexity.
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If you don’t write what you want or for yourself first, will it be very good? Writing non-fiction is different, because if you only write what people think they want, then you’re probably no longer writing non-fiction as it demands a certain amount of honesty. At times I have to say what I feel is true even if I know others may not like it.
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I agree, and am moving more that direction as I get older.
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I’ve been writing just for me, but with my current WIP, I’m writing to reader’s expectations. We’ll see how it goes!
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That’s interesting. What are those?
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I stick to genre expectations as much as possible, but in first draft everything and everyone but the characters and plot have to disappear for me. I let them back in at the revision stages. Great question, Jacqui 💕🙂
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What an interesting approach. I like that.
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I think once we’ve established our reader base they develop expectations that we must deliver. Your books always deliver, Jacqui!
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That’s my thinking too, Jill. I can’t imagine a horror story from you!
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Kudos, Jacqui! Your experience parallels mine. I used to write by the seat of my pants. When all I heard were crickets instead of ringing cash registers, I knew there had to be a better way. That’s when I discovered the “write-to-market approach,” which is really story structure.
In you bullets, you’ve captured the essence of story structure, which includes the many writing devices that propel writers from good to great — writers can write to market AND still create original works — you’re living proof!
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Well thank you! It took about 25 years for the first in my series as I tried to figure it all out. Now, I’m comfortable.
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I write a mix- sometimes it’s just for me, other times I make a blog post just to reply to specific requests or to provide another look at a topic the readers have shown they enjoy.
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Very eclectic. I like your mix of topics over on your blog.
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