A clash between Nature, modern man, and the Neanderthals. Only one will win.
Their world in decline, Yu’ung and her tribe find themselves in a battle for survival with Nature itself. Nature expected an easy win. She was wrong.
Savage Land is the third trilogy about primeval man in the series, Dawn of Humanity. A prehistoric thriller in the spirit of Jean Auel, Savage Land follows several bands of humans. Each considered themselves the apex predator. Neither was. That crown belonged to Nature and she had a plan to wipe them both from her planet.
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Here’s what I did the past month:
- I’ve changed the name–from The Savage Land to Savage Land. Does it matter to you?
- I continue with a ton of research, and everything I learn makes me respect our Neanderthal forebears more. They hafted stone tips to shafts, sewed clothing, cooked over fire, shared art and jewelry–I know. These aren’t the Neanderthals you’ve always read about. Scientists have learned a lot about this species of our genus in the last decade. You will be proud of the people you meet in this story.
- I break up my research by doing the many odd jobs I put off for a year to finish Natural Selection. Here are a few:
- In the past, I bought ISBNs from Bowker and set my publisher up as an imprint. As I assign the ISBN’s to books, I was lax about updating the Bowker database. I’ve cleaned that up.
- I have about six outlets for my books. The ones without many sales, I didn’t pay much attention to (places like Google Play) in the push to finish the last trilogy. I’m taking time to clean them up.
- My education books required updating to reflect current times (No, I haven’t addressed ChatGPT yet–but that will have to come). Not done with the updates yet, but working on them.
- My writing phases are: 1) outlining, 2) drafting, 3) editing, 4) whatever else. I’m on the outline phase right now so I work in a spreadsheet. I’ve managed to write only 500-1500 words a day (once as high as 2500) because I spend a lot of time moving scenes within books.
- I took time to be distracted when the opportunity arose. Here’s a video that stopped me in my tracks. I found it on Donna’s blog, Retirement Reflections, and couldn’t believe I’d never before heard of it. 190 million views! I’ve never seen such a high number! Listen and you’ll see why.
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Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular prehistoric fiction saga, Man vs. Nature which explores seminal events in man’s evolution one trilogy at a time. She is also the author of the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers and Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. Her non-fiction includes over a hundred books on integrating tech into education, reviews as an Amazon Vine Voice, a columnist for NEA Today, and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. Look for her next prehistoric fiction, Savage Land Winter 2024.
I like the title change and a look into the life of Neanderthal. Looking forward to this, my friend!
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Thanks, Terri. I am enjoying every day of writing so far.
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You’ve been busy!
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Havin’ fun!
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You’re plugging along nicely, Jacqui, doing what you love to do! I admit I like “Savage Land” better without the article in front.
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There wasn’t a single person who voted to keep ‘The’. I’m erasing it!
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Great job, Jacqui! It’s amazing how much time moving scenes and reintegrating them takes. I’m currently starting a thread sooner and embellishing it throughout the last two books of my Miss Liv series (under my pen name) and it seems to take forever. It’s rewarding and satisfying to see it come together with more strength. I hope you’re feeling the same sense of pleasure as you complete and/or continue your many tasks!
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I am–thank you. I’m reviewing your awesome Miss Liv book on March 24th (penciled in right now!) on my blog. What a great start to that series.
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Oh, how exciting! Thank you!! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 I plan to do a formal review and post for Born in a Treacherous Time in the near future. I’ll let you know when. Always so much to do!!
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Isn’t that the truth. I love writing and reading.
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I think “Savage Land” rolls off the tongue better than “The Savage Land.”
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You are right, Priscilla. Thanks to all of you, I am making that change!
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Sounds like you’ve gotten a lot done!
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I have! Thanks partially to you, saving me from reading all those annoying news stories!
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Ha! Thank you! You’re too kind!
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Jacqui, I admire our first peoples so much for their resourcefulness. We can actually learn a lot from them still. And yes, I like Savage Land better than The Savage Land.
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I read a lot of American Indian history. They loved the land–as do your First People–and everything on it.
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Absolutely. At the beginning of the pandemic, I took a Native Studies Indigenous Canada online course thru the University of Alberta. It was fascinating to say the least.
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That does sound good. Is it still available, or not streamed?
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I’m not entirely sure if the Indigenous Canada one is, but they are always offering different courses in the Native Studies department.
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Kudos on your progress, Jacqui! I think Savage Land will have more impact on the cover. As for the video, it left me in tears.
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Thanks, Liz! Helpful feedback for my title. I just changed the milestone!
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You’re welcome, Jacqui! Now that I think about it again, the effect of “the” is putting us at one more step removed from the land itself.
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Dear Jacqui,
we like ‘Savage Land’ better than ‘The Savage Land’. We always prefer the shortest possible title.
By the way Klausbernd writes about 2000 words per day, often just for fun. It’s a habit.
Wishing you good luck with your writing and publishing
The Fab Four of Cley
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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I have been shortening my titles. That first one–Born in a Treacherous Land–was pretty darn long!
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Dear Jacqui
Titling is quite hard. I only suggested a title and then an editor specialised for titling found the ‘right’ title together with me. I was taught, a title should be short, should give a rough idea what the book is about, and, if possible, should trigger a lot of (literary) associations. Like your title immediately triggers my association ‘Waste Land’.
Of course, the title depends on your readership group. Anyway, I suppose it makes sense to have a specialist for titling to assist you.
I always have a problem to find titles for Dina’s pictures when she asks me.
Keep well
The Fab Four of Cley
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Hi Jacqui – amazing to read – and I’m so looking forward to reading it. I agree the title is simpler and better … and yes gosh you are busy! Cheers Hilary
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Thanks, Hilary. I do hate being bored.
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You’ve been busy. I like taking the out and going with Savage Land!!! Strong and compelling!❣️
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Thanks for the feedback. I am making it official!
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YAYYYY!❣️
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I like the title Savage Land a little better. And I appreciate how you’re changing our perception of Neanderthals. I learn so much from your books. I loved the video! No wonder it had so many hits.
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I was hesitant to write about them because I didn’t want to spend three books featuring ‘dumb cavemen’. It took no time at all to find out who the ‘dumb’ one really was!
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Hi Jacqui, LOVE your new title – the tiny tweak is so much more dramatic. Can’t wait to read your Neanderthal story.
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Their world back then, with the Toba volcanic eruption, was terrifying. How they survived is a mystery.
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It’s a great video. I love that song. I think “Savage Land” is a better title than “The Savage Land”, it’s more Savage if you see what I mean. I took a 23andMe test and got that I have a lot of Neanderthal genes, the 99 percentile. Hopefully there’s nothing bad with that. Anyway, I am very much looking forward to the book.
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All good! They were amazing people. Modern man overall has 30% of the Neanderthal genome spread across our kind. That says a lot about the stoutness of our forebears.
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Well done. You are making great progress. I love that Stand by Me video. Can watch it over and over.
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So you’re the one who pushed the number past 190Million!
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You’re making good progress!
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Thank you–and having fun!
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If you go back as far in time as your stories, the change of name to Savage Land sounds appropriate, as it was all savage. Sounds like you’ve been busy.
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That’s a great point. Thanks, Jeff.
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Congratulations on your excellent progress, Jacqui. You are a true inspiration!
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And thank you for that video. Wow.
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Love this little writing update that gives readers a peek into your process! I feel that Savage Land has a more powerful ring to it than the previous name gave it credit for. 🙂
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Thank you. I think I agree!
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Keep it up Jacqui! You are such an inspiration! I like that changed title, I’ve always found “The” superfluous. 😀
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And ‘superfluous’ sure didn’t fit these people’s world. Thank you, Balroop.
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Sounds like you are making good progress, Jacqui. I like the title change from The Savage Land to Savage Land. Makes it easier to search. Best wishes!
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Good point about the search. I hadn’t thought of that.
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I agree about the “the.”
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That seems to be everyone’s choice. I’m glad it feels right.
You’re going to love this book when you read it, Anneli. These were wonderful people you and I would love to hang out with. Lincoln would enjoy them, too.
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I can’t wait!
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IMHO the name sounds better without the “the.” More raw and unprotected.
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Raw certainly fits my people’s time. Thank you, Ankur.
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It’s great to get peeks into your progress, Jacqui. Keep up the good work. And thanks for sharing that video! I started it up and the next thing I knew I was dancing! Lol. What a wonderful feel-good share. Thanks.
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I have never seen a video with so many views. Absolutely amazing. Thanks, Diana!
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Hi Jacqui, I think Savage Land is better. You are certainly keeping yourself busy.
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I am easily bored–and look who’s talking! With your cooking, reading for yourself, education for kids, writing–oh, and work!
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Yes, I could do without the work – haha!
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You truly are busy. Compared to you. I’m a total slacker!
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I don’t walk nearly as much as you, Neil. I’d say I live a lot more in the past than the present. Which is fine with me!
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Love your updated website. Changing the name of your novel without the THE reads better. I admire you. Wow you are organized.
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Thanks for the feedback on the title. I kept playing with it and just couldn’t come to a decision.
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I’ve never known you to Not be busy. Progress looks like it’s going as planned. I like the new title, way too many books have that useless ‘The’.
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I’m pretty inspired by this book. Poor husby gets more ignored than usual!
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You’re making great progress, Jacqui. I like the updated title. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you for the feedback! I think that’s what I’ll do–excise ‘the’!
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